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Flash Friday: “The Score”

Friday, June 27th, 2008

This segment is from an as-yet unpublished book in my Underground series.  This piece isn’t romantic, but it gives a deep look into one of the series’ important characters, and how he really feels about his job.

As always, please leave a comment to let me know what you think! :)  

 

“The Score” 

copyright 2007 by Esther Mitchell

   He told himself he was ready for this.  And he knew he was full of shit.  No one was ever ready to tangle with a dude like Terrence Walker.  One wrong move, one wild card in the mix, and it would all end in a bloodbath.  Matt Clipper sealed his lips in a grim line over the worried oath that pressed against his tongue as he primed his Colt Racer - a recent addition to street warfare, the weapon was a cross between a conventional handgun and a Super Taser - and double-checked that he had his backup.  He glanced into the rearview mirror of the Lincoln Continental.  “Y’all ready?”

     “Let’s roll.”  Snooks brandished his weapon with a grin just this side of sadistically gleeful, and Matt bit down on the wave of nausea that spiralled through him at the sight.  Similar anticipation preceded too many of his nightmares.  He resisted the urge to shudder.  He was getting way too old for this shit.  Problem was, he didn’t see how he was of any use to the Commandos if he left the streets behind.  He didn’t have Blade’s skills, or Jen’s brains, or Red’s background.  He had nothing to offer but what he learned out here, and the one thing Matt Clipper wasn’t was a leech.  So he did the only thing he knew how to do.  Even if it killed him.

    To combat the queasy uncertainty in the pit of his stomach, he pasted on his most cocky grin and reached for the driver side door.  He was about to put it on the line to get Big T to this meet-up.  The Man had best represent.

    “Let’s go.”

    Like a pack of wild animals, the gang-bangers piled out of the vehicle with none of the stealth or finesse Matt grew accustomed to as a Commando.  He winced inwardly, and triple-checked his weapons again.  He had a bad feeling this was about to go to Hell, and Jen would kill him if he got sloppy.  Hell, the voodoo woman would probably dig him up just to kill him again, if he got himself whacked.

   A snort of dark laughter nearly broke his lips, and he caught the wary look the kid beside him cast his way.  Rance stuck close to him since JT went down.  Poor kid wasn’t cut out for this life; too bad Matt didn’t know how to get him out.

   Matt’s gaze went to the building before them, and the scene was far too familiar.  Rundown and solitary among the empty lots that flanked it on three sides, this pre-World War Three tenement was where JT was murdered, and Matt’s fall into Hell began.  No one knew how much he hated every time he had to come back here.  The queasy sensation in his gut talked loud and clear.  When Matt Clipper checked out, it would be in a place just like this one; a building on the edge of forgotten.

    Damn.  He was dipping into the morbid, again.  That was a distraction he didn’t need.  Matt shook it off and cocked his weapon with a grin only he knew was forced.

     “Playtime.  Just remember, the Big Man wants T alive, or we’re in deep shit.”

     He wasn’t worried they’d fuck it up.  These boys might need some lessons in finesse when it came to assaults, but they were far from incompetent novices.  They had their own silent language, and while it didn’t have the sophistication he’d learned by hanging with Booters like Blade and Ace, he was comfortable with it.  These were streeters.  They knew the score.

    The gang fanned out to surround the front door, waiting for Matt’s signal.  He edged up to the door and listened intently.  The sound of an old building settling, and the drip of water somewhere in the distance, reached his ears.  No voices, no footsteps.  Relief wound through him.  No ambush; and that was good news to him.  He jerked his head toward the door, then eased it open to scoot inside cautiously.  The same couldn’t be said for his gang.

    Snooks barreled through the door like a maniac.  Damn it, was he high?  Matt couldn’t tell; he couldn’t see the other man’s eyes, but Snooks was sweating.  That was a bad sign.

    “Yo, Snooks, hold up a min-” His caution fell on deaf ears as Snooks took the stairs three at a time, disappearing into the upper levels of the old building.  There was a loud crash, and the Snooks’ voice echoed down the stairwell.

     “Prayer tone, muthafu-”  His words died in a spray of gunfire that lit up the stairwell and echoed off the tile walls.  Matt immediately dropped behind cover, his instincts honed to self-preservation by years of Commando missions.  He knew what that gunfire meant.

    “Damn it.”  Anger tightened his chest.  It wasn’t supposed to go down like this.  God damn it, Snooks knew better than to get high right before a hit.

    “Shit, dude!”  Rance dropped back as well, his face a shade between green and gray.  Kid was scared.  Smart.  “What was that?”

    “That,” Matt responded grimly, “was trouble.  Everyone, hang back.”

    With that quiet instruction, Matt started slowly up the stairs, forcing himself to draw even breaths as he went.  This was it.  He’d never told anyone, but he always knew he’d die alone.  And here he was, climbing into the lion’s den, alone.  Still, if he wanted this to go down without any higher of a body count, he had to go it solo.

    As he reached the first landing, Matt flipped his Racer to stun.  He didn’t want anyone going down for a permanent nap, least of all his mark.  The Man would never forgive him for that, and nor would anyone else.  Set to stun, the energy weapon would release a non-lethal electrical charge in a beam that would render the target unconscious.  He wanted Big T down, not out of the picture.  He had orders, after all.

Review Time!

Thursday, June 26th, 2008

I’m not often surprised by the way the world works… But I was blown away by the response to the second book of Project Prometheus, HOPE OF HEAVEN.  Here are snippets of just a few of the reviews I’ve received so far (if you’d like to read the whole review for any of them, simply follow the link included):
 

From ECataRomance:
 

Star Rating: 4.5 Stars
 

Hope of Heaven by Esther Mitchell is a scintillating and perilous story of a fight between good and evil while also being one of hope when there is nothing but desolation. […] Ms. Mitchell has always been a captivating author for me and this story is no different with characters that will cause your heart to pound while also providing a sensual read. If you love paranormal adventures then this is definitely a book you must read because it won’t leave you disappointed. 
 

Sheryl, Ecataromance.com 
http://sensual.ecataromance.com/index.php?p=735
 

 

From Coffeetime Romance: 
 

Rating: 4 Cups 
 

Project Prometheus is a story of hope, love, trust and compassion. Peter and Hope are characters with similar issues but at a stand still almost in their lives. I love their communication to each other. Peter’s voice practically booms off the pages sending off a dialect that is quite sexy. Esther Mitchell spins a tale weaving in romance while the characters struggle against odds but continue to endure until the end. I love how she makes Hope a strong doctor yet struggles with her own problems hard to conquer. She pens believable players and a fantastic adventure story. 
 

Cherokee
Reviewer for Coffee Time Romance
Reviewer for Karen Find Out About New Books 
http://www.coffeetimeromance.com/BookReviews/Projectprometheus2.html 
 

 

From Alternative Read:
 

Wow! In book two, Esther Mitchell has completed a smooth transition into the next chapter of “good versus evil” with an enthralling read adding a new character to an already fine cast. I can’t wait to see what comes next. There are dreams, visions, demons, egotists and a couple of nice surprises. I found it a pleasure to read. 
WitchGiggles 
http://alternative-read.com/ 

Writing Prometheus alive: Where history and mythology meet

Monday, June 23rd, 2008

    I know I’ve blogged before about Project Prometheus and its inspirations in mythology.  But I thought I’d touch on where it departs from history and mythology, today.

    :)   I know there are historical scholars out there who’d debate the history and mythology of ancient Mesopotamia with some of the details in IN HER NAME.  I’ve never claimed that I was writing historical fiction.  I know the history of Sargon written in books, and I also know the mythology of the area, as is written in books.  Thing is, I’m also aware of something many historians - whether through choice or the nature of things - forget: We don’t know everything about history.

    There is an age-old adage which says “history is written by the victor.”  In the case of ancient Mesopotamia, there’s not a whole lot written at all.  Even today, there are discoveries constantly being unearthed in the Middle East and North Africa which change how we view different eras of the ancient world.  IN HER NAME was written to take up the areas where history and mythology are vague, where what is and what could have been meet.

    History tells us Sargon I of Akkad was the first great king of Mesopotamia.  Mythology tells us of Ishtar’s adoption of a young man who later rose to become a great king through Her tutelage. 

     History tells us that Ashuribanipal degenerated from a decent king, in his youth, to a depraved and dangerous man in his later years.  Mythology tells us of the epic struggle between Ishtar and Ereshkigal, and of demons that feed on souls and inhabit the bodies of their victims.

    History tells us that every culture on the planet has tales of sunken cities and great floods.  Mythology (and Homer) tell us that Atlantis was once the center of the ancient world, but not where or how. 

    Through IN HER NAME, I sought to bring  these two areas of the same world together, to tell the story that fills in the gaps between segments of history and the rich tradition of mythology - to explore the possibilities that these events might all be part of a cosmic struggle between forces beyond the scope of human history to quantify.  The purpose of this?  Simply, I wanted to show the world that there are undercurrents to every action that are capable of rippling acros the pages of time.

   So was born the story that became the genesis of Project Prometheus, IN HER NAME.  Originally, it was meant to be a stand-alone novel - a response to the fear, paranoia, and terror that marked one of the darkest days in American history.  But, as the story grew, those ripples became evident, and spread outward, encompassing more stories - more tales spun from where history and mythology met, and a new world was born.